Liam’s 5 Card Flikr Story
One day there was there was a butterfly that was on fire. He was right next to a mountain. So the butterfly ran up the mountain and found a swimming pool. He jumped in it to cool down from the intense heat of the re. But then he realised he could not swim. So he swam over to the fairground. The next day he went back to the fair and there was miniature mountain sculpture with a little stick man on the top of it that was on fire. Lots of other butterfly’s seen him and one off them shouted looks it’s that little idiot who set himself on fire at the bottom of the mountain. And then everybody started laughing. So the little butterfly went home and set himself on fire then the next day he was found dead.
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Well done Liam. You have taken much more careful with your full stops than previously, keep it up! We are still missing your 10 week poetry project though? And creating your new Cirque Du Freak character?
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